Our video was fine, not the best, as it was voice overed, but I believe our criteria A was pretty strong. We could have worked more on our criteria C under different circumstances. I would give my partner between an EE and a ME. Even though he went away to Italy and left me all alone during class, he worked hard to finish the video and stayed up late the day before to finish the editing. Also, he wrote all his parts for the script (or the parts he was supposed to say), and helped edit my parts (or the parts I recorded and got lost). Voting for Socialism!! Mr. Plotzki's Feedback:
Hello Tomas and Jae Hee , Here is the feedback for your Election summative video. On the whole, this was an outstanding project for Grade 9 students that allowed them to communicate a ton of knowing and understanding in some very fun and creative ways. Let’s break it down. To begin, I was assessing your Crit A Knowing and Understanding of the Political Spectrum. In terms of understanding the political party I assigned to you and how it would impact our school, your work was excellent; your video is loaded with clear, accurate descriptions and explanations of your political ideology. You have an excellent command of all of the content we covered in class and you clearly show your own independent work. You expertly and cleverly apply your party's ideology to our school community. Your video is evidence that you learned so much in this unit. And in terms of understanding the other parties on the political spectrum and how they would impact the school your work was satisfactory; you have some detail and depth on the other political parties and how they would shape our school community. Next, I assessed your Crit C Communication. I wanted to see a political ad campaign video. One that was creative, clear and engaging. In term of making me a technically proficient video your work was satisfactory; while there are some slight problems with lighting and sound in your video, in general it shows a good level of technical skill and thought that went into the filming process. And when it came to assembling this video into a clear piece of work with editing your work was satisfactory; your video has a good level of editing with some cool effects, transitions and a solid use of music. In general your abilities in editing help hold the audience's attention and make the video engaging to watch.. A really mixed bag guys. On the one hand, the section where you worked together and collaborated well (the script) turned out excellent. You did indeed learn a lot about fascism, the spectrum and did a great job of applying it to our school. But despite the groundwork we laid about communication and collaboration during Tomas' trip the video itself is not as strong. A montage of images is not nearly as engaging as an actual video would have been. However, I very much appreciate the fact that this video was completed on time, and at a nice technical level There is only one shot with a team member in the video. While the images and sounds you select are fine, the overall level of engagement has room for improvement. This is a shame as you two could have and should have produced a top-band video. Nonetheless, a satisfactory effort and one that shows an excellent level of knowing and understanding. Final Crit A (out of a possible 8) is 7 Final Crit C (out of a possible 8) is 5 -Mr. Plotzki Ps. Winners to be announced next class ;)
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